Good focus on final product and what you want to communicate.
Try to decide early on the types of scents you will use so you underpin visual journal imagery.
Comment on the identified themes and subjects outlines in the proposal. To what extent do they offer sufficient scope for research and development of significant/appropriate content.
Good concept of ecological products
This will be interesting to visualise but difficult to make unique, how will you do this?
Comment on the proposed practical and conceptual application outlined in the proposal. Is it clear and does it offer the potential to develop a significant body of work?
Good understanding of how you will apply the work by print and the problems you face.
Why not look at gift packs/labels/business branding?
Comment on the breadth and appropriateness of the contextual references. To what extent are they informing the decisions regarding product, range and methods of distribution?
Notice what works well on existing products, but notice the qualities in your own work to make it stand out!
Comment on the proposed project plan. To what extent is the plan realistic with regards to workload and timescales?
Good start of visual development.
Again, underpin scents early on so you can focus on certain imagery
Test on eco friendly stock/recycled paper.
Comment on the clarity of the project rationale. To what extent have the aims and objectives of the project been clearly stated?
You have identified what audience you are aiming your products at, as well as where they can buy it - It is very clear what you intend to do at this stage.
Comment on the identified themes and subjects outlines in the proposal. To what extent do they offer sufficient scope for research and development of significant/appropriate content.
They offer a lot of possibilities for direction, you may have many options in terms of research because these products can be packaged in many ways.. through visual investigation you can select a range of outcomes.
Comment on the proposed practical and conceptual application outlined in the proposal. Is it clear and does it offer the potential to develop a significant body of work?
It can be significant if you look into all of the products you are proposing to package. i think your audience works because the shops you will be selling products from do champion tasteful packaging.
Comment on the breadth and appropriateness of the contextual references. To what extent are they informing the decisions regarding product, range and methods of distribution?
They inform your ideas well. It is good to see relevant research/stuff with a similar one of voice because it is easy to picture your work in context.
Comment on the proposed project plan. To what extent is the plan realistic with regards to workload and timescales?
Workload is ambitious enough I think - because you have a number of products to look at, so you will need to research individual approaches to packaging e.g. body scrub and lip balm have different packaging. Depending on your work rate it will be challenging but manageable.
Additional comments and suggestions
Lovely ideas at this stage, visually appealing, I love your visual journal patterns. keep it up!
After my peer review I decided that to make my product range unique and to help it stand out, I intend to theme all the products around Yorkshire, specifically places in Yorkshire and the wildlife and plant life. I think this will help give the products a unique selling point and also more of a context.
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